+ very interesting. never really heard anything like this before. sounds like one of those weird OSTs where they only use midi back in the early 00's :P
- felt very unorganized though. the transitions weren't really planned out really well. work on that then this will be a solid track.
- the mix is bland too. pump up the lows and brighten up the highs, thats why it sounds like those lofi midi tracks.
that's about it. keep it up.
+ you got the right ideas here. nice percussion flow, catchy melodies
+ not really sure if its videogame, more like some form of hip hop? haha.
- one thing to note is there is no bass. if you want it to sound sort of trap ish, gotta get that 808 kick with the long tail base overlay.
that's bout it, nice work
Thank you for the feedback! When you say that it lacks base, do you mean that the lower parts of the beat aren't clear enough? Could you perhaps point me in the direction of some examples of what you mean? :)
+Chill. Reminds me some of Bonobo's tracks.
+great melody, excellent vocals.
-needs more variation. e.g. ur vocal pads panned left could have a filter on it every 4 bars... your guitar countermelody could have a few newly placed notes, maybe more background sounds too.
that's about it bro. really liking this vibe.
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